character+schetch

**__ by mykaila story __**
Dave Conroy is determine because when he fell in to the water he was cold and wet he shod have made

a fire but he did not mack a fire instead he when't on because there was a cabin just a couple of miles

away. h e is also brave because even throw he could not move his fingers he still when't on but he was so

tired that he lead down on the snow and then he when' in to shac k and then he died. I understand your meaning Mykaila. You are trying to express some good ideas; however your grammar is interfering. Please come and see me for some assistance on some of these assignments. 2.5/6